i believe its time to update, after all, its been more tehn a year, so i will start saying this, i am working on chapter 2 of my story (finally oh dear god im motivated to write) and at the moment it has no title but i have an idea of what it will probably be. furthermore, im probably going to add to chapter one because i think it may be a little bit too short for my tastes, after all if im going to try and make it a book might as well make it fairly detailled and somewhat of a read and not just something you blaze through in a matter of a few hours lol. but to those of you who have read the first chapter, please send me your comments on it one more time so i know what you think and please be serious, i dont need comments like "its cool/neat/awsome" i need comments that are in depth about what you think about the story at that moment in time.

thanks

the one and only,

Kiyoshi Ronin Knight XXVIII